Horsemeat ([info]horsemeat) wrote,
@ 2005-12-03 19:42:00
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Do you bite your thumb at me?
A cry from the depths of decay are the souls of the victims of a domestic dismay, two sides of the same family see a blood red vendetta as they claw their way to perfect their image and their portrayal.

Not a word spoken as the two fight for respect, whilst their future is put on trial! The presure on the children becomes the weakness that shows a foundation built on abuse and solid hatred!

The anger waves through the blackened thoughts of the parents that call this injustice. The offspring remain lost in this storm of aggression, the only way out is through love and death. The mark will be set, and the pain will be gone

....for there will be a plague on both their houses!

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[info]jillzebub
2005-12-03 08:18 pm UTC (link)
lol, ur spellings maketh the amusement,

and yes, i bite my thumb at you! gotta love shakespeare's put-downs!

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(Anonymous)
2005-12-03 09:14 pm UTC (link)
lol- i should've known i would get the attention of grammer junkies!

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[info]pyr0man1ak
2005-12-04 12:44 am UTC (link)
I Do Bite my Thumb at you sir, do you bite your thumb at me!!!
Yay for creative writing!!!
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[info]magicmidnight
2005-12-05 05:45 pm UTC (link)
... I see allusions to Romeo and Juliet. ~smile~

The rhythm and occasional rhyme make it seem like a song- I'd love to see it put as that.

But will the plague be a curse or a blessing? For the line is often blurred, and they are one and the same.

PS I will check out the samples ASAP- am being dragged away again. Oh dear, should I get my ear muffs out as well? XD Just kidding, I can't wait to heat it. ^-^

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[info]horsemeat
2005-12-05 11:21 pm UTC (link)
Be it a curse or a blessing? No matter how it will be seen- it will eventually bond the two houses- both alike in digity in our fair Verona

if it were to be made in to a song- it would have to be black metal- the kind of metal that cursed scandavians to burn churches whilst reflecting upon a dark yet beautiful nature of human existance (so that obviously means its influencial- with the right words).

Enjoy your home this Christmas- i trust its alot more warmer than anything here (and take care not to sell Issy to some pimps- i'm sure she has a better use than just for money)

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[info]magicmidnight
2005-12-12 05:48 pm UTC (link)
Thank you- and the same to you, too. ^_^ It's not warmer, per se, but my house sure is warmer than my dorm. >_>

... Really? I would have thought... perhaps a woeful tune, a melody with a haunting pitch, something that would be sung by a funeral pyre, and would curl up with the smoke to melt with darkened skies of slate grey. Something piercing and almost wailing, painfully reminding one of the mortality of eternity, and maybe accompanied by a voice that is as empty as the wind, the boundaries merely outlining the abyss of loneliness of a love chased from life.

But is that bond really true? Or is it a bond that like the blood of love and hatred will dry and crumble away into the dust once the blossomed wounds of memory have withered away?

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[info]horsemeat
2005-12-12 08:35 pm UTC (link)
a woeful tune? I know....it should be gothic/ doom metal- the kind of metal that brings out raw emotion with sweet melodies and often striking riffs. Great examples include My Dying Bride and Type O Negative- these two bands alone are the sole influences on today’s gothic bands like HIM, Evanesance, etc. but so much more melchony!!!!

The bond in which you described is possibly the best description of it, and therefore it is the best resolve to this tragic tale!

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[info]magicmidnight
2005-12-15 10:04 am UTC (link)
Never heard of the first two bands, but I think HIM's songs would be a perfect influence.

But that's the saddest part- it's not really a bond. Once the memory of the lovers has crumbled away, the petty feuds that foreshadow the mindless hatred (all for the sake of boredom- nothing else to live for) will begin once again.

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[info]true_san
2005-12-08 01:39 pm UTC (link)
dude that sounds like my love life :S im now worried:P

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